by Jad Apr 18, 2010
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
Her presence so sacred/ Unable to talk |
Aah this was so sad. The emotion was so overpowering & each word brought something new to your poem. A different style, but I must say I liked it. Awesome job. |
by Sylvia
Austin, I like the way this was written, not quite questions but almost and answers to them. Your words have a maturity about them that alot of people never achieve. Well done. |