by Cindy Apr 20, 2010
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
Springs Lost Beauty |
by Miyaki Zhen
This poem is one of a kind!!:)) |
This was sooo beautiful...and simple yet full of meaning...great write *_* |
I really loved this poem. I think it flowed really well. good write ^_^ |
by NightFlyer
Very heartbreaking poem, the level of despair so deeply expressed that anyone reading this can't help but be moved and feel what you're going through. The advent of spring cruelly indifferent your sadness. All of this so powerfully expressed. A beautiful poem. |
Wow! This poem is so beautifully written and I really love it... It's no wonder that you won, congratulations! You deserve it :) I love relating emotions to nature, and you've done that in a very calming way. My favorite stanza was the last: |