So sad yet so beautiful. Great write dear. This one is just mindblowing stanza |
by Sylvia
Not having a loved with you during the changing of the seasons can take away the beauty of it. Well done. |
by Lady Nik
I love how different your piece was. I think a lot of people see spring as something mew and refreshing but you took it from a different angle and I liked that. Loved the flow of the entire piece and how well your owrds fell into place. Very nice work :) Nik |
by Jad
Excellent job with the contest piece and you have a vivid picture here and a very beautiful poem. I loved how like Nik said you took this poem from a different angle. Good job and keep writing. |
This is so sad indeed, yet beautiful like everyone else has already mentioned. You did a flawless job, I really loved each stanza, line, word. Very nicely done :] *hugs* |
One word: Beautiful! |
One word: Beautiful! |
by debbylyn
Beautifull sad....especially the last evrse |
by anand singh
Cindy, this is a sad but beautiful rendition of the changing of seasons.It is however sadder to know that a special person no longer here to witness this change, but deep in your heart you know that he is watching and experiencing the same feeling as you do. |
by Corinne
Wonderful writing Cindy - I would have written "Eyes blinded by sunlight" - or "Blinded eyes from the sun" |
by Lu
Cindy I truly think this is one of your best writes to date that I have read. The imagery you created is heart stopping - touching- and the word choice perfect. |
by debbylyn
Congrats on the win this week! |
by Melpomene
Cindy, |
by Meena Krish
Spring does bring out various emotions..and this |
by Boy
With spring comes cruel sorrow |
by Andrew
Damn.... this poem touch me truly a beautiful poem i can relate to this feeling 5/5 |
Wow! This poem is so beautifully written and I really love it... It's no wonder that you won, congratulations! You deserve it :) I love relating emotions to nature, and you've done that in a very calming way. My favorite stanza was the last: |
by NightFlyer
Very heartbreaking poem, the level of despair so deeply expressed that anyone reading this can't help but be moved and feel what you're going through. The advent of spring cruelly indifferent your sadness. All of this so powerfully expressed. A beautiful poem. |
I really loved this poem. I think it flowed really well. good write ^_^ |
This was sooo beautiful...and simple yet full of meaning...great write *_* |