Olwin, the last lines are fine. (smiles) You gave a voice to how the earth must feel when she sees and feels how we treat her. Well done.

Thanku Sylvia :) Lol

I agree with Sylvia in that the last line is fine in how it gives voice to earth. You have given a good description about earth. Good job and keep writing.

You did a wonderful job, never doubt yourself.. now take that last comment off your poem please haha. What a wonderful idea to write about a holiday not many of us stop & recognize that it actually exists. Nicely done as always