You captured the essence of that volcanic eruption and the cloud of ash. I cannot imagine how it would be to be trapped in all that mess. Well done.

You did a good job describing the volcano and making it seems as if it keeps people at bay and keeps them in constant wondering. Good description and keep writing.

Nice job on this piece Olwin...that volcano is really causing problems around the world.
Love Cindy

I watched a news story on this, its really sad how badly it is effecting everyone in that area. It is destroying so much. Interesting how you decided to write a poem about this, I really thought you did a great job of informing us of something going on in the world in an interesting way.