Aww that is sad...and the poem is beautiful...totally understand the pain behind the speaker....the sadness wanting to live or to feel alive, but all the speaker feels in death or being dead.

I feel u on dis 1. i like it. its deep. u go

Awww you poor thing :( i too have felt this way before, and you have a wonderful job of putting this onto paper. it's beautiful and tragic and i absolutely loved reading it <3 i hope things get better for you hun

5/5 btw ;)