Comments : And Sin There Be

  • 14 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Sin is always there in the world and in human beings. The sad thing is that the acts committed by human beings aren't always seen as sin but are nevertheless. Well done.

  • 14 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Yes sin is in everything..in every life and no
    rain can wash it all away except the time comes
    for this world to end..a write that makes us think...take care

  • 14 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Loved the questions that you weaved into the piece here , allows the reader to think . Really nice work

  • 14 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    //When life becomes cold- and frightening
    No words from heaven only scream of hell
    Virtue is faded, fear tied up the wings
    How will you live? No voice will tell.//

    totally loved this stanza... reminds of what we have done to ourselves... destroying life ... living in a hell like situation...

    //But no rain can wash off the sin - and sin there be
    In life, in love - in every facet of you and mine. //

    ^^some mistakes cannot be repented... they remain with us forver...

    this is a very powerful write... well written ...