by CY GINDLE Apr 24, 2010
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Bruises cuts and tears |
by Brix Ambray
This is sad , dark but powerful.I love the rhyme. WEll written. |
by Mollie
Wow man. that was deep.. i felt it. really. i know what its like. well i shouldnt assume. but yeah that was deep. |
by Brix Ambray
Well done..very sad and full of emotions |
Interesting poem well written and very sad, i guess this is how we grow into the strong confident people we become. I do know i dont wish my past on my kids. Well done. Grant |
by Francine
It's so sad, but really good. I'm sorry :( |