I am not sure my words could do this poem justice. I LOVE YOUR STYLE

Absolutely beautifully written. As someone already mentioned, I love your style of writing, I am at a lost for words. Truly amazing write, keep writing. xo

An excellently written thought provoking poem. Complicated at first by its underlying emotion and only really made graspable by its last line, "Forgive me, father, for I have sin". 5/5 Ray S

Very good! I loved the flow and nothing seemed forced here. The images that I saw with this poem just blew me for a whirl! My favorite stanza was:

A crimson red stain for a withering rose
Of a love once felt, now forgotten

Oh how this stanza stood out to me! =-] Marvelous!

Very good! I loved the flow and nothing seemed forced here. The images that I saw with this poem just blew me for a whirl! My favorite stanza was:

A crimson red stain for a withering rose
Of a love once felt, now forgotten

Oh how this stanza stood out to me! =-] Marvelous!

I thought the flow and rhyme scheme were pretty good for the most part. I wouldn't plural one rhyme and not the other though it just doesn't fit well. Also the neding might need to be changed around a little bit because it doesn't really make sense. "Forgive me father for I have sinned" would have sounded a 100 times better. Some extra words are capitalized that shouldn't be as well but easily could be fixed. 5/5

Karl said most of the things I saw. I agree with him on the ending though. I like the raw emotion put into this piece, that was enjoyable. Again your imagery is very strong here and makes the reader see and feel everything that's happening for you. I haven't written in this style for awhile but I do enjoy seeing others do it so job well done
:] Nik