by SiLeNtLy ScReAmInG Apr 25, 2010
category :
Dark, fantasy /
other
The shadows play across the wall, |
by Im not broken anymore
This is an amazing peice as always!! you've really got a way with words. I felt every bit of this the fear and panic. Im very sorry for the pain you were cause and i hope it didnt really happen because i know how terrible that is. But poem wise good job its great |
by m
I reallly love your poems.. 5/5 |
by Sourav
Very well structured and the depiction is very good too. Liked the construction of the lines as you've used the words nicely. Well written! |
Very griping and imaginative. 5/5 |
by East Poetry
A heart hammers inside its fragile cage, |