A heart hammers inside its fragile cage,
Louder and louder in the deafening silence,
Its thunderous beating, an act of treason,
Accomplice to her forced compliance.

this is my favorite stanza, this poem is really really good poem.

If only she could just get away
forget her past, forever more.
and find a love she welcomes in
one where she opens the door.

1 for 1... I'd like to read more of yours.

Very griping and imaginative. 5/5

Very well structured and the depiction is very good too. Liked the construction of the lines as you've used the words nicely. Well written!

I reallly love your poems.. 5/5

This is an amazing peice as always!! you've really got a way with words. I felt every bit of this the fear and panic. Im very sorry for the pain you were cause and i hope it didnt really happen because i know how terrible that is. But poem wise good job its great