This is a new side of your writing and I really really loved it. I'm a lover of darkness and this was a very dark piece. So well done and full of raw scary emotions. The images in this piece are out of this worl and I loved how amazing this piece was. You always dount your work and you never should. You're a wonderful poet with refreshing ideas to share with us. Great work babe :]

I've found the title intriguing yet clever. "Masticate morgue"

Your choice of words bemused me. I had to have my friend next to me to search for their meaning. But I enjoyed reading it. With this type of poems, I have to sit and read it several times to fully understand it. I liked it, Very good.

Wow this piece is quite amazing. I think that the word choice was absolutely wonderful and the descriptions were immaculate. This piece is just wow. Excellent job.