Comments : Soul Mate

  • 14 years ago

    by Odessa

    Aboslutely loved it. Very forceful, yet sweet.

  • 14 years ago

    by mandy

    Very dark, very sad. Your word choice was flawless, and the pictures you created were very vivid. Wonderful write, 5/5!

    mandy :)

  • 14 years ago

    by Lana

    What a sad verse. You sense of loss came through very strongly here. Good flow and rhyming.