Beautiful imagery ... lovely description of the wind :)

Austin, I could feel and hear the wind as I read each line. You captured it to a tee. Well done.

Awesome work, wind can be a good thing & a bad thing. Thats the message I got from this.. a really nice write.. brilliant!

I'm soo glad you can do these because I surely can't lol. Very well done hun :) Nik

A calming and beautiful Tanka . One of the best I have read.