Hmm this was a good piece of work you have written here. I enjoyed the emotion throughout the poem and the imagery you have given the reader. You did a good job with this piece. Good job and keep writing.

Interesting how you wrote your poem with the title of the poem throughout the poem. That was different... you truly show how you feel in this piece, a nice job .

Interesting style working the title in like you did. I hope someday soon that you will forget this person and write happy poems. From the words you write about him, he wasn't the person for you.

Lovely write...

Years were once seconds
a long time ago..
now everlasting seems so long.

^^ these are such thoughtful lines :) well written

This one. :]