A well written poem of love loss though a bit different to the usual bitter and heart rending type I usually read here.
Life and love are mysteries which if we are lucky can give us all we desire but when the thread breaks it can be hard to bear so we dust ourselves off and head right back more cautious this time hoping we don't break that thread again and if we are lucky somebody comes along to bridge the gap. Excellent poem that gets to the point Ray S 5/5

Meats--meets

'How do I let these hurts slip by,
right off my back, they bead.'

A question mark is needed in the first line.

'taking moments and or hurts,'

This was a confusing line. Consider revision.

I'm also Pisces, so this is somewhat relatable lol. Pisceans are sensitive but we tend to give 'too' much. Still, it's great to be one haha. Great piece. I won't even comment on your rhymes, they're always good. Keep writing!
-X

I wish the same thing but to sad this world doesn't have people who understands us like that...... also i know how you feel because i am a Pisces also :)

I wish the same thing but to sad this world doesn't have people who understands us like that...... also i know how you feel because i am a Pisces also :)

I wish the same thing but to sad this world doesn't have people who understands us like that...... also i know how you feel because i am a Pisces also :)

I wish the same thing but to sad this world doesn't have people who understands us like that...... also i know how you feel because i am a Pisces also :)

I wish the same thing but to sad this world doesn't have people who understands us like that...... also i know how you feel because i am a Pisces also :)