Rain upon the Roof

by Jad   Apr 29, 2010


A rhapsody of metal clinging,
As drop of waters fall down,
Sliding down the roof onto the ground
With this sound repeatedly ringing.

The echo in a silent room,
Of clouds crying up above.
A feeling so beloved
Of these clouds that loom.

Beating upon beating are bared,
And never once though does it break,
Holding up the water as it doesn't breaks,
-A shelter from the elements of the air-

Finally the rain has stopped,
The sound dies away.
Letting out the suns rays,
As the last raindrop drops.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    Awesome... Love how you depicted this, Lol. The rain on the roof...

    Especially loved these lines...

    "And never once though does it break,
    Holding up the water as it doesn't breaks,
    -A shelter from the elements of the air-"
    FANTASTIC! it reminded me of someone holding another up in the storms/trails of life :) Just my thought... Lol

    and the last 2 lines... Superb :)

    "Letting out the suns rays,
    As the last raindrop drops. "

    WELL DONE my friend :)
    Excellent.

  • 14 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    The sound of raindrops and the whole scene
    of a rainy day is well described here..good
    writing!

  • 14 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Beautiful, I love the sound of rain, I felt like I was in the moment & could hear the rain as I read. Awesome

  • 14 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Austin there is nothing like the sound of rain on a roof, especially a tin roof. Nice job.

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