Austin there is nothing like the sound of rain on a roof, especially a tin roof. Nice job.

Beautiful, I love the sound of rain, I felt like I was in the moment & could hear the rain as I read. Awesome

The sound of raindrops and the whole scene
of a rainy day is well described here..good
writing!

Awesome... Love how you depicted this, Lol. The rain on the roof...

Especially loved these lines...

"And never once though does it break,
Holding up the water as it doesn't breaks,
-A shelter from the elements of the air-"
FANTASTIC! it reminded me of someone holding another up in the storms/trails of life :) Just my thought... Lol

and the last 2 lines... Superb :)

"Letting out the suns rays,
As the last raindrop drops. "

WELL DONE my friend :)
Excellent.