Hello,
Truly I liked your poem, I loved the affection put into the lines. The way you related it to mudane things of the day like it was casual and mattered little even though it's clear it does. Only a few grammatical and spelling errors ruin the flow of the poem. 'I's' need to be capitalised, it's only for dramatic affect that you are disclosing your emotions and travelled has a double ll. If you use a full stop remember to captialise the next word. Finally I loved the description of the road, I can imagine a broken girl with a cold coffee wondering a bare street. It's brilliant, imagery is what we rely on for great poetry. Well done! 4/5