Wow..this is strong piece too..
i love ur endings...always
this was realy a sad one too , you know
being with someoone who cant realy knw or read us..how amazing would it be to be with a person who knows that our yes is a no..and our smile is a wound..

gd piece
one suggestion :

You look at me
And catch me staring into space
no need realy for the and

>>you look at me
catch me staring into space

And you don't know
The different emotions of my face
>better this way ? :
and you can't read
the different emotions of my face

an opinion.both ways
ur poem is amazing
and i surely loved
5/5

I liked this one. It is so true, I think we are all guilty of this at some point in our lives. We don't want people asking us questions so we just put on a fake smile and seem as if everything is okay when in fact it isn't. Very emotional piece, I loved it.