The rhyme scheme seems off in this poem. I can't put heads or tails on it, but for some reason it does. I really like the last line, but the quote from the plays is. "For never's there a story of greater woe than this of Juliet and her Romeo." just in case you wanted to know.
The beginning was really strong, as was the end. The middle should be a climactic part, but it just sounded like a filler. I good filler, but a filler none the same.
I think this poem has amazing potential, and I thank you for the read.
>~Spirit~>