Over You

by White Orchid   May 1, 2010


Over you
Can't you see?
No more tears
Falling from me

Weight so heavy and unbearable
Lifted off my shoulders
As if it were light as a feather
No longer will you bring me down

The taste of freedom
tastes oh so sweet
these feelings you have for me
Of these I am aware

My feelings are great
And yours??
Being brutally honest
I couldn't care

Making the right decision
Never felt so good
I'm proud of myself
I knew that I would

Now on to better things
Meeting the person right for me
You can tell me you love me
But I'm no longer listening

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  • 12 years ago

    by DeviousCharmer

    Loved it , great discription :D

  • 12 years ago

    by DeviousCharmer

    Loved it , great discription :D

  • 13 years ago

    by RynZelara

    Good continuation of sticking to that conviction. I don't believe poems should be haphazard random writings all the time, and that some of them should have a flow between them, like a story so-to-speak. This does a good job of that.

  • 14 years ago

    by PinkyPrincess

    Wow... this poem is very inspirational and made me feel free and positive just reading it... That is definitely a great feeling that many people should appreciate.. "the feeling of freedom"
    Great job!

  • 14 years ago

    by tainted melody

    Love this sometimes the decisions you waited sooo long to make because you thought they would hurt end up taking a weight off your shoulders and you feel great ^_^

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