I have never read a poem as honest as this one seems to be. I like the realism, and the longing all of us a humans seem to have, dreams unfulfilled, or crumbled before our eyes. Never give in or give up :]]] thats my motto/// excellent poem

Great ending statement! I can tell your a musician! Great read~ :)

Awesome. raw.

I love this poem it speaks the truth:)

Yourrrr worddssss; make me so very speachless <3

whoa. Mister Amazing Dib :D

You have a lot of wisdom in your words, laced with strong emotions. I noticed in each there is more to the write then just words which makes for a gifted artist, rather it's a painter, song writer or poet. You bring a lot to each read for the enjoyment of all.

Connie