Aw your not bad :( this poem is amazing and so beautiful and she would be so proud of you. i think this is your best one yet, so much emotion and it definitely is written from your heart, which is not dark you goof! :P
love you and miss you and hope to talk soon xoxo

You have such a way with words. You seem to have the ability to make them work for you, instead of the other way around. Keep it up!