Defeat

by Jad   May 1, 2010


Suffering defeat again,
I lock myself up tonight.
Oh, to see a delight
When I see no more light.

Failing every day,
Shattering hopes die,
Overpowering thoughts collide
That slowly deprive.

Depriving of beloved thoughts,
Once treasured and stored inside.
To figure out they were all lies,
Hanging on to life trying to survive.

Defeat conquers all,
Leaving shattered dreams,
And so it seems deemed
To not follow our dreams.

Trying to find right answers,
Leaves me defeated and soar.
As everyone ignores,
Their fallen friends so torn.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Defeat can conquer us if we let it but in all of us there is a survivor and we can take the defeat, turn it into a life lesson, learn from it, makes us stronger.

  • 14 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    Awww sad poem Aussy but very good. You know me :] I'm in love with your writing. Yiu amaze me everytime. Great work deary. Nik

  • 14 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Defeat does shatter our confidence and robs
    us of hope..but it is that same hope that still
    lives inside of us to try again..this is a heartfelt
    write..hope you are okay..take care.

  • 14 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    You can really feel the emotion in this piece & can tell this person feels defeated., sad but a truly amazing piece.

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