You can really feel the emotion in this piece & can tell this person feels defeated., sad but a truly amazing piece.

Defeat does shatter our confidence and robs
us of hope..but it is that same hope that still
lives inside of us to try again..this is a heartfelt
write..hope you are okay..take care.

Awww sad poem Aussy but very good. You know me :] I'm in love with your writing. Yiu amaze me everytime. Great work deary. Nik

Defeat can conquer us if we let it but in all of us there is a survivor and we can take the defeat, turn it into a life lesson, learn from it, makes us stronger.