Oh Cupid,

by ShIsAnA tHe OnE aNd OnLy   May 2, 2010


Oh cupid you little devil,
you shoot me with your
golden arrow and hooked
me up with a rebel.

He abused me and abused
me. He smacked and kicked
me but the worst part is
he used me.

Oh cupid you are so cruel,
with your black frosty wings,
you told me he wouldn't drool
over other girls,but you lied.

Though I do not blame you.

I blame myself, For not watching
out,now i am confined in this
relationship yet you shoot me
at neck,you made me fight
at war with my own heart.

We fought and we fought,it faded
and it died,no more pain,and no
more kisses in the rain.

Yet I don't understand,why I have
This razor blade so close to my
vain, they say I'm so sane, but what
they don't know is my cutting issues,

I plead insane.

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  • 13 years ago

    by DirtRoadGirl

    You are really good. Very easy to relate to this one :) keep up the awesome job <3 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by RainbowSlider

    Awesome. My favorite of yours so far. Makes me want to read on. I like the feeling.

  • 14 years ago

    by NotCryingForHelp

    Awesome, work on the flow a little in some parts, but its really good. i especially love the last line, very cool :)

  • 14 years ago

    by Nobody Knows

    Great poem :) I really liked the end although it is sad. Good job :D

  • 14 years ago

    by Twisted Angels Whispers

    I love the creativity in this with cupid. Props for that. Its pretty good just watch your flow.. it seems like the rhyming is kinda all over the place. It ruined the flow for me a bit. However a good poem overall :)