by ShIsAnA tHe OnE aNd OnLy May 2, 2010
category :
Dark, fantasy /
other
Oh cupid you little devil, |
by DirtRoadGirl
You are really good. Very easy to relate to this one :) keep up the awesome job <3 5/5 |
Awesome. My favorite of yours so far. Makes me want to read on. I like the feeling. |
Awesome, work on the flow a little in some parts, but its really good. i especially love the last line, very cool :) |
by Nobody Knows
Great poem :) I really liked the end although it is sad. Good job :D |
I love the creativity in this with cupid. Props for that. Its pretty good just watch your flow.. it seems like the rhyming is kinda all over the place. It ruined the flow for me a bit. However a good poem overall :) |