by Rachel RTVW
I really like the word choice, imagery and your use of enjambment in this piece. Beautifully penned! |
by Rachel RTVW
But you need to change "learnt". The proper way to say it is learned. |
by Rachel RTVW
Well considering the entire piece isn't written in British English, it gives a feeling of inconsistency and not charm in my opinion. It just sounds like a grammar mistake in an otherwise nicely penned piece. So Miss Anna it doesn't sound PROPER! |
by Midnight Sky
Lovely poem 5\5 :) |