Comments : A Nocturnal Wanderer [Haiku]

  • 14 years ago

    by Lu

    OMG Myryn such a stunning read! And the title amazing and very definitely eye-catching.

    laden with nightly drama
    ^^^
    Wonderful insertion !

    And OMG what a breath-taking pic!

    Wonderfully done Myryn

  • 14 years ago

    by Melpomene

    Myryn,

    I was stunned by this piece of poetry. In my opinion you have created such an elegant Haiku.. I loved the use of insertion of "Nightly drama" & the word choice of "sullen" and "drunk" I have never head of the moon being described in such way and the images you portrayed without me even looking at the picture was beautiful in my mind. I am absolutely impressed by this poem. Everything was spot on. A beautiful read.

    Well done.
    -Mel

  • 14 years ago

    by Faithless

    Honestly I'm not really a big fan of Haiku, but I have to make an exception for this one. Your little words, paint such a beautiful image. I agree with Mel, I love how you use "drunk" and "sullen" in your poem. I believe you have taken Haiku to another level. I'm really impressed with this piece.

    Excellent Job partner;)

  • 14 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Ablsolutely brilliant piece of work...
    the imagery is beautiful... lovely haiku :)

  • 14 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Truly a brilliant piece, a great description of nature written in a original, creative way. Loved it very much, beautifully done .

  • 14 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    I love your word choice. This form is difficult because it is so short but you have mastered it with this little gem. Picture painting imagery. Great job Myryn!

  • 14 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    This is what Haiku is all about, painting a picture for the mind to say with just a few words..well done and congratulations on the win!

  • 14 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    Aww what a lovely poem, can't believe I missed it. You have a wonderful talent and I always enjoy your work. Congrats deary :] Nik

  • 14 years ago

    by Cindy

    Wonderful job on your Haiku :)
    Congrats on the win!
    Take Care
    Cindy

  • 14 years ago

    by Switchblade89

    That was beautiful, i wrote a winter haiku before. haha

  • 14 years ago

    by Iyla

    All i have to say is, amazing =] 5/5 best wishes

  • 14 years ago

    by Sunshine

    I agree with Azzza. I am not a fan of haiku except hat I wrote one 2day lol but no really...what a fantastic poem is this !!
    I dnt believe ur ability to draw such an image
    with only few words..and as awesome as this one

    Now i look forward to read more
    5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Soft Parade

    That was inspiring, I loved the use of language and the imagery is so unique.