Comments : Dead painting

  • 14 years ago

    by Dreaming out loud

    What a interesting and creative poem. I am blown away with the format and wording that holds the reader to every one

  • 14 years ago

    by REESEY

    Beautifully put...:)

  • 14 years ago

    by Tempest

    Beautiful poem. I love it..

  • 14 years ago

    by Kuro

    Seems a little angry. i hope this vent helped you feel better. full of a lot of emotion. theropudicly written, indeed.

    nice job,
    Kuro

  • 14 years ago

    by victoria

    This poem was inspired by a story i read in my English Honors class my senior year. It was a bout a guy who was cruel to his wife(Not physically tech but mentally) and he wanted to paint her. Well it took him along time to paint her and he was getting obessed with his painting rather than his wife...and after along time of ignoreing his wife and her not eating(i think) she died. So shes traped in a painting. idk...i liked the concept. thank u guys.