Hey this one of my fav. symbolic poems ever, I think your ability to write about things in a hidden way is amazing and you have really begun to sound like a pro. ^_^

Wow! I love this poem... From the title to every word! Well done!

Its saddening to see such terrible things happen. such experiences has very negative effects later on. trust issues and nightmarish dreams to deal with. one does not simply over come these things with time. i hope you can find the heart to forgive and the mind to learn from past mistakes. i'm sure you put a lot into this and it is good that you can let it out somewhere safe. this was a touching poem you wrote.

~kuro

The temporary imperfections of the human race can really be a force for self-affliction and affliction to others, and unfortunately we're all susceptible to it. All we can do is pick ourselves up and remember that one day we won't ever have to worry about it ever again.

This had a subtle darkness to it, I suspect from the subject matter. Good write as well.