by Sylvia May 5, 2010
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
--------------Grief |
by anand singh
There a silver lining at the end of every storm and this beautiful piece reminded me of this. |
by Meena Krish
An interesting form and I like the way you went from grief to joy..you described the feelings very well..good job! |
All these words describe grief in a different way; I like this form because the ending is an antonym which leaves the reader on a positive note. Nicely done. |
by Jad
Sylvia you have done a good job with the form and I really liked it. Good job and keep writing. |
by Lonely Rider
Beautiful trasition from grief to joy... at the end it made me smile :) |