Beautiful trasition from grief to joy... at the end it made me smile :)
well written Sylvia :)

Sylvia you have done a good job with the form and I really liked it. Good job and keep writing.

All these words describe grief in a different way; I like this form because the ending is an antonym which leaves the reader on a positive note. Nicely done.

An interesting form and I like the way you went from grief to joy..you described the feelings very well..good job!

There a silver lining at the end of every storm and this beautiful piece reminded me of this.
The way you make the transition to the joy at the end is absolutely wonderful.
An enjoyable read...
Paul...