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by Yakari Gabriel May 5, 2010 category : Life, society / meaning of life
Perhaps tomorrow, I'll worry I'll think about troubles when the sun disappears behind the horizon Perhaps I'll cry over a broken dreamPerhaps tomorrow silence will sentence my soul a mistaken fairytale will turn to ashes perhaps I'll get used to lifePerhaps tomorrow I'll remember my loneliness in a corner of my heart bittersweet tenderness will ruin my being Perhaps I'll change forever Perhaps tomorrow; Because today I'm happy.
by Lu
Yaki The way you have changed in your writing the last little while is awesome. I really really enjoyed this write you penned hun! Perhaps tomorrow silence will sentence my soul a mistaken fairytale will turn to ashes perhaps I'll get used to life ^^^ Loved this part The repetition worked well in this piece. Though normally it is not something I fancy. But I think it gave this piece a big hug of personality. Well done hun !!!!!