Yaki
The way you have changed in your writing the last little while is awesome.

I really really enjoyed this write you penned hun!

Perhaps tomorrow
silence will sentence my soul
a mistaken fairytale will turn to ashes
perhaps I'll get used to life
^^^
Loved this part

The repetition worked well in this piece. Though normally it is not something I fancy.
But I think it gave this piece a big hug of personality.

Well done hun !!!!!