Fire(Diamante)

by Jad   May 5, 2010


--------------Fire
-----------Hot, kindle
Burning, suffocating, melting
Inferno, flames, wet, dampen
--Moving, spraying, reviving
----------Cool, Pleasant
--------------Water

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  • 12 years ago

    by Boy

    Sharp thinking.. making together two opposite things.... smart writing...

  • 12 years ago

    by Meme

    Water and fire are always known as opposites, and the way you wrote this was clever. It was a smooth transit from fire to water.

    Like it so much.

    Keep it up !

  • 14 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Loved the flow from fire to water...
    well written :)

  • 14 years ago

    by Faithless

    I like how you make the transition from fire to water. As big as a fire maybe, water will always overcome this flames. Nice topic to go with the form. Keep it up.

  • 14 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Ahhh..fire and water. You did really good describing fire then bring in water to dampen it..well done with the form :)

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