Beautifully penned. You could have removed some of the unnecessary filler words (and,I) but the piece flowed so well I almost didn't notice..

Vivid imagery and nice word choice in many places. Great job!

You have painted vivid images with your words. Liked the read and the smooth flow..congrats on the win!

This is such a beautiful piece you have penned.

Forgetting what I know
of this life, this show,
when my heart is the act
another step that has cracked,
while these veins empty memories,
just these dear memories -
fluid polaroids of sun trails and lunar tales...
I sleep eternally in benevolence
upon each minute's breath.

Such wonderful imagery you have left for the readers mind.
very well deserved win!
Congrats
take care
Cindy