Crush

by maya raphael   May 7, 2010


Thinking wondering if he feels it to
Shaking my head knowing that he doesn�t even have a clue
Wondering if it would be best if he knew
Mayb just mayb I shld let him kno
How can I make my feelings show
Without seeming obsessed
Completely stressed���.
in need of a break
Theres only so much one girl can take
Finally deciding that I should be wary
For crushes are only temporary
Or so they say
Because ive been feeling like this for more than just a day
But wat am I exactly feeling
Its kinda like a sensual healing
Being
That it hasn�t been like this in a while
I feel like a child,
All giddy and free
Anticipating wen we will see
each other again
Wat happens wen we do
Do I tell him that hes been on my mind
Or should I take another kind
Of approach
Not wanting to give up my hopes
God knows I cant cope
with anymore hurt
Becus after him�.. Er after us
I find it hard to trust
So mayb I should stop it here
Make it clear
That im absolutely
Totallie crushing
Wait no I mean
That its nothing
Were just frenns
Lets not begin
On something complicated
But how do I say it
Wen I kno it mite hurt u
Knowing deep down inside that its not entirely true.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Su

    I like it.
    ez read too :)
    keep it up!

  • 14 years ago

    by nobody truly knows me

    This was a good poem. again, the meter was a little off in some places. you could try adding in punctuation. it's amazing how much just a single comma or period can change the emphasis on a certain thing. it can make the impact of the poem much stronger.

    as a side note, i know it may seem unimportant, but spelling can actually affect a poem a lot. i was thrown off some by some of the spellings in the poem.

    it was a good poem poem over all though. good job hun.