by maya raphael May 7, 2010
category :
Love, romance /
first love
Thinking wondering if he feels it to |
by Su
I like it. |
This was a good poem. again, the meter was a little off in some places. you could try adding in punctuation. it's amazing how much just a single comma or period can change the emphasis on a certain thing. it can make the impact of the poem much stronger. |