Butterflies :]

by maya raphael   May 7, 2010


Butterflies
That light airy feeling, that tingly sensation
That annoying tickly feeling that makes you lose your concentration
That lovely happy feeling that involuntarily washes over
The slightest little touch that makes you want to move closer,
She�s worrying, wondering if he felt it to
Wishing hoping that he might get a clue
Sitting side by side�. both wide-eyed
and
Both waiting for a cue
Hes contemplating, his heart skipping a beat
Both not wanting to move from that special seat
Their friends,
fearing that its not a mutual feeling
Both not dealing,
with it well�.
She scoots a little closer but not making any contact
Cursing at her self hoping that he didn�t catch that
Hes wondering
did she try to make a move?
Not wanting to lose her, so now he has to choose
But whose gonna signal it again?
That light airy feeling, that tingly sensation
That annoying tickly feeling that makes you lose your concentration
That lovely happy feeling that involuntarily washes over
The slightest little touch that makes you want to move closer

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  • 14 years ago

    by nobody truly knows me

    This is a pretty good poem. There were a few spots where the poem didn't flow very well, but over all it was well writen.

    i actually loved this line "That light airy feeling, that tingly sensation
    That annoying tickly feeling that makes you lose your concentration."

    um....for my advice on this one...maybe just focus on the meter some. i find that reading the poem out loud helps a lot with that. if you have any questions feel free to message me. =3