Unwritten tale

by Remie   May 8, 2010


One breath, one touch, it takes one look, my heart it aches, wish I could read him, an unwritten book. Mysterious and silent, he sits in thought, and I watch, try to see, in failed attempts to know him. He's like an unexpected explosion, yet still calm and deep, a challenge to me, such a beautiful disaster. Maybe someday his story will become a reality, but for now he remains nothing but a mystery.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Remie

    That's fine :) type of feedback I'm looking for thank you. I'm really not too good with titles as u can see lol.

  • 14 years ago

    by Remie

    That's fine :) type of feedback I'm looking for thank you. I'm really not too good with titles as u can see lol.

  • 14 years ago

    by Mommys Lil Angel

    Really good I can relate to this. Its a really good poem, you just need a better title. No effence.