Life

by Christina Catastophe   May 8, 2010


There is no happy medium between birth and death,
You're either breathing your taking your last breath.
It can all come on quick,
Be fine one day, the next, horribly sick.
You never know what's gonna happen tomorrow,
Wake up fine, or your life Jesus will borrow.
Live life like you want to,
It's yours, it wouldn't be without you.
Never regret anything you've done wrong,
Because if it doesn't kill you, it makes you strong.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Minkus

    I didn't get a sense of cohesiveness in the poem. The end didn't seem to reveal a deeper insight; it just pulled in a cliche. The eighth line was awkward to me. It was hard for me to find the rhythm to go with the rhyme.

    On the other hand, the poem started off very strong. I think you could work with the beginning (especially the first line) to come up with something great. Still a fair effort overall, and keep writing!

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