The flow in this poem is much better than your first. I love the meaning in this poem. I found it to mean that people should ought to seek out inspiration with more emphasis in their lives, even if it is inside the smallest things. After all the the smallest things in life are often the most important. This poem was a wonderful to read. The meaning and everything especially the stanza about the violet in December. Well thought out. 5/5

This poem is actually a very long story. There are rhymes again, here and there, but that seems to be your style. As a story you told it good, the words you chose in the several parts of it fit, and the little rhymes you put made it color a little. Can't say it's much of a poem though 4/5