Human

by Minkus   May 8, 2010


Oh, we all want to be different, no use lying
But then we contradict ourselves; we want to belong
this mixed desire, this innate contradiction:
To be an individual, a whole
And to be a part, rather than apart
What do we expect from life?
We're wishing for both North and South
both West and East
as we wish we were older, then wish we were younger
Satisfied by death but obsessed with life
with holding on to that vibrant string until it finally snaps
and we tumble into our restful graves.

Staring but so rarely seeing anything new
We seek novelty from the comfort of our recliners
Doing the same thing over and over
but expecting new results to flock to us like birds to an old carcass
The "sane" are what's "in"
a world of breached asylum
And the warden, the guards, are never seen but we worship them nonetheless, calling it faith
Believing it what we cannot see
What are we, collectively...
Humane? Insane?
Just "human," please... it's both.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Melissa

    I'm really diggin' your poetry. Especially these life pieces. I love the (sad) truth you portray here. It's so confusing to be human, one day we want this, the next, not. We sacrifice moments for vanity, and never wholly delve into where our hearts really want to beat. I love the way your poems make the reader think, nice tactful wording. Am definately a fan! :)

  • 14 years ago

    by ADyingProphet

    I love the wording in this poem and the picture it portrays. But the only thing that is leaving me from not wholeheartedly loving this poem is the flow of it. When read out loud, the poem is very choppy. You have many different varying flows, some lines are extremely long, then short, then mediocre, then long again. I'd work on the flow and scheme of this poem, then it'd be a complete masterpiece. 4/5 but could easily be a 5/5.