A love misunderstood and taken for granted..used and left behind..a situation which happens far too often..very sad..

Wow I really like this poem its very good =]
The second stanza was my favourite and i found that they all flowed into each other very well!

Great job! This is a very enjoyable read =]

A very powerful message here Nik. The emotion was immense. You could feel the girl wanting so bad to be with this person. In the end though he just insulted and ignored her. A very sad piece but nicely written. Good job and keep writing.

A little violent but i like that :P great read :)