by Nomad Being May 9, 2010
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
She took my name for the last time |
by Milo
The choice of words shows a great imagery, especially with "She buried her sorrow and loneliness untied" and "In a shallow abyss suppressed I failed to breathe." |
by Cassandra
I love tha way you word you poems with so much emotion. I likkeded it |
by victoria
Very lovely poem. You have a way with words that keep the reader keep reading. |
by chind
Loved how you ended this! nice work, you had some really good lines in this piece, i enjoyed it! |