Abandoned Love

by Nomad Being   May 9, 2010


She took my name for the last time
But her feelings as they were for the first
She must abandon my love for her happiness
Words scattered when her voice whispered

A hand to never let go, gentle and passionate
She buried her sorrow and loneliness untied
Of course you shall but abandon my love
My soul shattered and melted thorough inside

Angels in despair and heaven still unprepared
In a shallow abyss suppressed I failed to breathe
Tenderest of her sensuous touch but crippled lips
We can't live without each other though it was real!

We began to depart in a shadow gloomy and streak
Convinced not to look back hearts filled with belief
Those eyes pleading her happiness and that was me
Had tears in her eyes too, there were throbbing seeds!

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  • 13 years ago

    by Milo

    The choice of words shows a great imagery, especially with "She buried her sorrow and loneliness untied" and "In a shallow abyss suppressed I failed to breathe."

    Just a magnificent poem.

  • 14 years ago

    by Cassandra

    I love tha way you word you poems with so much emotion. I likkeded it

  • 14 years ago

    by victoria

    Very lovely poem. You have a way with words that keep the reader keep reading.

    wonderful

    victoria

  • 14 years ago

    by chind

    Loved how you ended this! nice work, you had some really good lines in this piece, i enjoyed it!