Loved how you ended this! nice work, you had some really good lines in this piece, i enjoyed it!

Very lovely poem. You have a way with words that keep the reader keep reading.

wonderful

victoria

I love tha way you word you poems with so much emotion. I likkeded it

The choice of words shows a great imagery, especially with "She buried her sorrow and loneliness untied" and "In a shallow abyss suppressed I failed to breathe."

Just a magnificent poem.