by Gasttlee May 9, 2010
category :
Friendship, family /
family
When we first met in High School, |
The lyrics of this song could stand on their own ,though I so love to hear heart song sung |
I would categorize this more of a song. But I when I used to write songs before I wrote poetry. Everything is nice, happy go lucky in this. |
Beautifully written. If you're trying to make this a song, I dunno if it would work as well as it does just as a poem. I hope the person your trying to give this message to you hears this. This is very good, I loved it from the picture, word choice, flow of the poem. I have an older brother myself and he was always there for me, although we fight, he's still there for me, but I dunno if I'd write something like this for him haha but anyways I can relate to this poem very much. Easily 5/5 for me. |