Comments : Don't Change Yourself, Just Change You

  • 14 years ago

    by Sunshine

    Let me tell u, this is an excellent writing, with so much truth in it.
    your ending was so powerful.
    and the flow was really so easy to follow.
    I love how u started it and just sadly felt the bitterness of ur words.

    whats harder than loving someone who wants us ye in someone else s shoes or dress of frame.I believe if someone doesnt love us for who we are, can never love us for who we might be.
    and who doesn't accept us, doesn't deserve us in the 1st place

    a well written piece
    5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by White Orchid

    Wow!! That is all I can say after reading that. I truly understand what you are talking about here. And you were right when you said someone can't love you if they don't like you. If someone wants you to change then they can't love you. I also loved how you ended it with strong words saying that you won't change yourself just to be with them, I agree 100%. This poem was deep and awesome!