by Meena Krish
Love can be an addiction an it can heal you or can swallow you leaving behind bitter sorrow..liked this read, take care. |
by Jad
Love can be a poison someone gives us but it turns out that it was all a lie or as you put it love is a poison. The emotions could be felt throughout this piece. Good job and keep writing. |
by Cindy
Temps |
by Anthony M
Your poem is easy to identify with and flows well until the last half of the poem where it becomes just a touch clunky, a little tweaking here and there and I think the entire poem would be quite excellent. Still a good read with a great usage of drugs as a metaphor for love. Well done :) |
by Sylvia
Love can be a poison to us especially when it is not returned as we think it should be. Well done. |
by M I L L Y
Prescribed to cure loneliness; |