A truly excellent and moving poem of want and lost love.
Been there know the feelings but in the end I let go and my life turned for the better I to had two kids with my looks invested in the woman.
Nothing will ever change that they are my children and they share their love with me daily as they do with my divorced wife.
5/5 Rays

Its hard to let go of a love whom we have spent a long time with..a touching write..take care.

This is my favorite from you so far Randy. You are a fantastic storyteller. Flawless and stunning. I added this poem to favs. I love the way you plant a seed to stay connected. This should have won a contest somewhere..
Yes it is that good. Keep writing exactly like this- you need to feature your best poems...ones like these get lost when you dont feature them
enjoyed to the max!
Lostlove

I like how you used the bud.. and how you wish you can find a flower at the end.

This one was a lovely poem, even though it was about lost love. I really like your love poems, they sound tranquil.

Oh how sad and beautiful. :( Your words again are so moving.

"This week I felt the cosmos
pull you ever close to me.
Could swear I seen a bird fly by,
Like the bird that I set free."

This stanza is so beautiful. Throughout your poem I could just picture everything, a beautiful landscape.